Weather as a Fictional Character

As readers, we naturally think of people as characters in books. Certainly the hero and heroine are lead characters. Lots of secondary characters win our hearts–including the 4-legged furry and loyal kind. Pets are characters. As are monsters (think Sci-Fi). Weather as a Fictional Character.

Have you thought of the weather as a fictional character?

Quote: "A character is the representation of a person in a narrative or dramatic work of art (such as a novel, play, or film)." ~ Character Arts page on Wikipedia. Design by Author Kristin Holt.



Fictional characters: Weather as a Fictional Character

  1.  …show us who the hero/heroine is through their interaction
  2.  …have unique personality traits (or are sometimes “cardboard cutouts” when those traits don’t matter, e.g. a briefly noticed server at a restaurant)
  3.  …impact the story (see #1)
  4.  …involve “the illusion of being a human person”
  5.  …mimic and reflect real people (but no matter how much we fall in love with fictional heroes, they’re not real…or so says my hubby)
  6.  …like real people, are flawed
  7.  …like real people, have redeeming qualities
  8.  …may be likeable or unlikable
  9.  …may be a help to the main character, or a hindrance (Antagonist)
  10.  …have reasons (motivation) for doing what they do


An antagonist may not always be a person or persons. In some cases, an antagonist may be a force, such as a tidal wave that destroys a city; a storm that causes havoc; or even a certain area’s conditions that are the root cause of a problem. An antagonist also may or may not create obstacles for the protagonist.

Societal norms or other rules also may be antagonists. (emphasis added)

~ Antagonist, Wikipedia


An unsympathetic character is one who remains elusive and unengaging to the reader. It’s not that the character is unlikeable. Unlikeable is fine, and often—as with everything from Lionel Shriver’s mother of a serial killer in We Need to Talk About Kevin to Shakespeare’s Richard III—the entire point. [sic]


A character can be sharp-witted, twisted, arrogant, contradictory, vain, narcissistic, boorish, even morally repugnant (think Tony Soprano)—as long as the reader understands the character’s motivations. When readers don’t respond, the problem isn’t the character’s misery or self-absorption or churlishness. (Here I’m thinking of Emma Bovary.) The problem is that the reader can’t see far enough beneath the character’s surface actions to understand the deeper feelings underneath.


~ What Does It Really Mean When People Say Your Character is Unsympathetic? Christina Baker Kline decodes the most dreaded critique




The Marshal’s Surrender is set in mid-December, 1900, in the Rocky Mountains of Colorado. In the best of circumstances, people got along just fine. They prepared for winter with ample firewood, stoves and fireplaces, barns, winter pastures closer to the main buildings and stores of hay and grain to feed the livestock. They were prepared with adequate clothing, axes to break the ice from watering troughs or streams, and food stores to see themselves (and neighbors in need) through ’til the next harvest. By 1900, the market sold anything a body could want and the train made daily deliveries of everything from oranges to nuts to ready-to-wear heavy denim trousers.

Mountain Home, Colorado, is one of my fictitious towns in a very real place. Mountain Home is patterned after mining towns of the same era like Leadville, Central City, and Georgetown, Colorado.

Central City, Colorado. 1872. Image: Public Domain, courtesy of Wikipedia.

Central City, Colorado. 1862. Image: Public Domain, courtesy of Wikipedia.

Georgetown, Colorado. 1867. Image:

Georgetown, Colorado. 1867. Image: Public Domain, courtesy of Wikipedia.



Leadville’s average snowfall, in inches: November- 19.5″, December- 19.5″, January- 18.0″.

Georgetown’s average snowfall, in inches: November- 11.6″, December- 13.2″, January- 12.5″.

Central City, Colorado Average Snowfall

Central City has had an average annual snowfall of 193.3 inches over the last 30 years, which is 763% more than the national average (22.4 inches). 29% of Central City’s snow fell during the winter months [Notice that the bar graph shows March and  April are the heaviest snow months].

It is the 99th snowiest city in the United States.

The record snowfall was 63.0 inches on December 04, 1913250% more than the national average for snowfall records.


(emphasis added) [Source]

Central City, Colorado's monthly snowfall in inches. Image:

Central City, Colorado‘s monthly snowfall in inches. Image: Weather DB


With heavy winter snows like are known in this mining region of Colorado, it made sense in The Marshal’s Surrender, with the Ruffian Gang threatening Mountain Home and intentionally leveraging the weather against the law, that Winter take on a villain’s role.

Winter is both a setting and a character. Winter is where and when this story takes place. Like a palatial throne room or Caribbean island, the scents, sights, tastes, surroundings, temperatures, lighting–involve the characters’ senses. Winter is also an entity that causes setbacks, impacts the senses (blizzards impair sight, the ability to hear, masks clues like horses’ hoof-prints) and threatens life. Exposure in wintry threatening circumstances can easily lead to death–just like a showdown with a powerful villain.




  1.  … show the strength of the hero [or heroine] (the stronger the villain, the stronger the hero)
  2.  … ensure the hero can’t win too easily (no conflict, no story)
  3.  … are important characters to the story
  4.  … are characters readers love to hate
  5.  … are convinced they’re the good guy, thus when not an inanimate object (like “winter”, though some would argue winter has a mind of its own), the villain has an objective
  6.  … can be merciless and show no mercy, even to the innocent
  7.  … sometimes earn comeuppance
  8.  … might be who/what the hero triumphs over, but often the hero triumphs over something within himself (especially in a romance) (limiting beliefs, erroneous beliefs, baggage, etc.)
  9.  … posses redeeming qualities, as no one is entirely bad (nor entirely good, so heroes have negative qualities too)
  10.  … can be larger than life
  11.  … aren’t always identified


That lack of identity (who are we fighting against?) is one of the challenges U.S. Marshal-turned-Sheriff August “Gus” Rose is up against. He knows the gang of bandits terrorizing his town have an agenda, but he doesn’t yet know why. He doesn’t even know who the bad guys are–yet, but he’s determined to uncover the truth. As the book’s opening pages reveal, the community has taken to calling the bandits the “Ruffian Gang” for lack of anything specific. Identifying the villainous men is one of Gus’s greatest challenges, and Winter, in its villain role, frustrates Gus’s efforts to protect people and their property.

The Marshal’s Surrender



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